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:://Aubade 
  
Dolce.
Graceful, full of
ethereal fragility,
a haunting melody,
rosily fingered,

Poco a poco.
scales softly
across the silence
darkened horizon, rousing
dreamers who lingered.

Adagio legato. 
awakened clouds bow,
respect to timeless song
nascent tones sounding
in fresh trilling light,

Accelerando.
shadows swallowed
on a sibilant sigh,
faded, darkness dissolves,
fearing hushless bright.

Swelling crescendo. 
luminesence pools
forming a joyous salvo–
strains played upon 
a now pealing sky,
  
Fortissimo vivace. 
streaming resonance
beaming, greets the day
enraptured rhapsody
bids starlight goodbye.


De capo.

Original:
 Song
   Dolce. Dawn, rosy fingered, 
   Poco a poco. Scales across a darkened horizon 
   Adagio legato. Building brightly 
   Accelerando. Shadows are swallowed  
   Swelling crescendo. By a joyful salvo  
   Fortissimo vivace. Greet the new day. 
   De capo.

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5 thoughts on “

  1. Aubade    Dolce. Graceful, full ofethereal incadescence,a haunting melodyrosily fingered,Poco a poco. swiftly scales softly acros’t the murky dark of a silenced horizonrousing dreamers who lingered.Adagio legato. Awakened clouds bow, in respect to timeless songnascent tones sound,trilling fresh light,Accelerando. shadows swallowedon a sibilant sigh,faded darkness dissolves,fearing hushless bright.Swelling crescendo. Luminesence pools upon a now pealing sky,strains from a joyous symphony–conducting clouds to array,
    Fortissimo vivace. streaming resonance beamsdemanding the retreat of starsfor in enraptured rhapsody,song, shall greet the day.
    De capo.”

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  2. You have a good ear for alliteration, but the SAT/GRE-diction doesn’t necessarily make it better…and i think the problem with poetry is that it’s probably much better heard or slammed than read.

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  3. Aubade    Dolce. Graceful, full ofethereal incandescence,a haunting melodyrosily fingered,Poco a poco. swiftly scales softly across the murky dark of a silenced horizonrousing dreamers who lingered.Adagio legato. Awakened clouds bow, in respect to timeless songnascent tones sound,trilling fresh light,Accelerando. shadows swallowedon a sibilant sigh,faded darkness dissolves,fearing hushless bright.Swelling crescendo. Luminesence pools upon a now pealing sky,strains from a joyous symphony–conducting clouds to array,
    Fortissimo vivace. streaming resonance beamsdemanding the retreat of starsfor in enraptured rhapsody,song, shall greet the day.
    De capo.

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