:://needs feedback, what do you think this is about? i need to know, is the theme too overt? in ideal circumstances, you should have to read it once or twice before you “get” it.
buys a boiled blade
“hot water kills
the grubby white-coat claims
though she’s still living.
she stumbles into the car
alone and only half as alive
falling into the backseat memories
curling into her self
trying to fill the void
before we cross the border
i tell her she’s still an innocent
but wonder–who i am to absolve her.
one life traded for another.
inspired by: old everwood episode.