:://until the air is worth breathing–hold your breath
Perhaps if I train my breaths
to fall in cadence with silence
reigning in my greater passions
and making myself utterly still,
like sunlight, you’ll settle on me.
this needs work, i know
i need to tighten it.
just bear with me.
yep, possibly a lil’ work. i like it tho. me comprende i think. ironically the words coincide perfectly with your picture :lol:dunno bout yer greater passions.
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its perfect …yup peeeeeeeeerfeccttt!
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I have to say I like it a lot too, short and sweet. There’s always room for improvement but you’re starting at a great place.
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i like the comment on the picture! hey, do NOT treat me like nathan, i will NOT go down w/o a fight, if you have time, give me an email! pweeze??
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